First of all, I had to go back and figure out what in the world was the Evaluative Summary that was assigned. I had to go back and find the assignment and then the paper. It was a little over a month ago and I couldn't remember a thing about it. Which makes it a little tough to blog about.
I do think my paper could have a better flow to it. My opinion is stated several times in my paper. I stated several times I could agree with part of the article but not all. I do believe that it is ok to not agree with everything. This is what makes the world go round. It would be pretty boring if we all agreed on everything.
I did use the verbs is, are, was and were a lot. But I am confused when it seems that the book tells us to use them. And now in our rewrite we are not to use them. UGH! I am the type of person to write a paper and be done with it. I understand good writers will write something and then rewrite again. I guess, I fit the category of write and get it over with. Yes I am whining!
I will take a look further at my paper and attempt to rewrite. Please help with the the due date of the revision as Oct. 19th is a Tuesday not a Friday, (oops). Thanks!
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